Prelude MS JJ: Spatial and Physical Order of Entry

Inside back cover draft

Indeterminate time of entry

Rough draft pencil and ink

Zv

Preamble draft [either entered first or last; prob. first]

Rough draft

Zr-Yv

Opening river section: "was it for this?"

Copy

Yv-Xv-Yr

Raven's nest episode

Copy breaks down into draft

Yr draft into

Wr-Wv

Apostrophes I and II

Draft (Yr) into copy on Wr-Wv (Ink lines)

Vv/ Av/ Br draft into

Wv- Xr

Trap-robbing episode drafted and re-copied

Rough pencil draft on V, A, B into copy on Wv and Xr

(Pencil entered later than ink)

Ur-Uv-Vr+ lines on inside back cover

Ending

Copy

Vertical entry at top of Tr-Ur-Uv

Link passage between episodes

Draft

Sv-Tr-Tv

Boat-stealing episode

Copy breaks down into draft

Sr

"There was a boy"

Copy

Rv

Boat-stealing episode

Revision and re working of lines on Tv

Rr

"The soul of man"

Copy (DW hand)

Pv-Qr-Qv

"I would not strike a flower"

Discontinuous draft text

Av/Br

Revision of Vv for Xr

Rough pencil draft.

Two Visual Representations of MS JJ Order of Entry

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