Prelude MS JJ: Spatial and Physical Order of Entry
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Inside back cover draft |
Indeterminate time of entry |
Rough draft pencil and ink |
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Zv |
Preamble draft [either entered first or last; prob. first] |
Rough draft |
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Zr-Yv |
Opening river section: "was it for this?" |
Copy |
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Yv-Xv-Yr |
Raven's nest episode |
Copy breaks down into draft |
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Yr draft into Wr-Wv |
Apostrophes I and II |
Draft (Yr) into copy on Wr-Wv (Ink lines) |
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Vv/ Av/ Br draft into Wv- Xr |
Trap-robbing episode drafted and re-copied |
Rough pencil draft on V, A, B into copy on Wv and Xr (Pencil entered later than ink) |
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Ur-Uv-Vr+ lines on inside back cover |
Ending |
Copy |
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Vertical entry at top of Tr-Ur-Uv |
Link passage between episodes |
Draft |
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Sv-Tr-Tv |
Boat-stealing episode |
Copy breaks down into draft |
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Sr |
"There was a boy" |
Copy |
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Rv |
Boat-stealing episode |
Revision and re working of lines on Tv |
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Rr |
"The soul of man" |
Copy (DW hand) |
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Pv-Qr-Qv |
"I would not strike a flower" |
Discontinuous draft text |
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Av/Br |
Revision of Vv for Xr |
Rough pencil draft. |
Two Visual Representations of MS JJ Order of Entry
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